Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise, avoid fillers, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct minor errors (use numerals in words, choose one term). For example, say why you used alternatives and add a brief positive or negative feeling to enrich the response.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Because my parents couldn’t afford one, I usually rode a scooter or a skateboard instead, so I still enjoyed playing outside and learning balance.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., ‘because’ and ‘however’). Replace vague phrases with precise information and avoid absolute statements. Mention possible exceptions or trends to show nuance.

예시: Not really — cycling isn’t very popular in Australia overall. For example, many streets are unsafe for cyclists due to heavy traffic, and there are relatively few dedicated bike lanes; however, cycling is more common in some inner-city areas where infrastructure is better.

× No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I never had a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is actually grammatical; no article error. Keep as is.

× My parents couldn't afford 1 so I usually used scooters or umm skating boards.

✓ My parents couldn't afford one, so I usually used a scooter or, umm, a skateboard.

Errors: (1) The numeral '1' should be written as the word 'one' in normal prose. (2) 'Scooters' and 'skating boards' are plural while the context implies using a single device at a time; using singular 'a scooter' and 'a skateboard' is more natural. (3) 'Skating boards' is nonstandard; the usual term is 'skateboard'. Also add articles 'a' before countable singular nouns and a comma after the dependent clause. Suggestion: Use 'one' instead of '1', use singular countable nouns with 'a/an' when referring to a single item, and use the standard noun 'skateboard'.

× No, not really.

✓ No, not really.

This brief response is acceptable in the present tense and matches the question; no correction needed.

× In fact, cycling culture is not that common in Australia, especially among women and girls, because many streets can be unsafe and there are a few dedicated bike lanes.

✓ In fact, cycling culture is not that common in Australia, especially among women and girls, because many streets can be unsafe and there are few dedicated bike lanes.

Error: 'there are a few dedicated bike lanes' can be interpreted as some exist, but the speaker likely means 'there are few' (meaning not many). Using 'a few' implies a small positive number; 'few' emphasizes scarcity. Also the sentence is otherwise grammatically correct. Suggestion: Choose 'a few' if you mean some exist, or 'few' if you want to emphasize lack; remove the article 'a' when using 'few' to express scarcity.