Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak with correct grammar, keep the answer concise, and organise it with a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Avoid filler words (umm/uh) and redundant phrases. Use past tense consistently and supply a specific detail (when, how you felt, or how you used the bike).

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My father suddenly bought it as a surprise for my birthday, and I rode it every day to visit my friends. I remember feeling excited because it gave me more freedom.

제안: Give a clear opinion, use plural/singular correctly, avoid repetition and fillers, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to make your answer coherent. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, and electric bikes are becoming especially common. Because fuel prices have risen, many people choose e-bikes for short commutes, which reduces traffic and pollution.

× Is I had a bike when I was a child, umm, my father brought that bike uh, which was a very surprised one for us because that is a sudden umm, uh, purchased, made by my father so.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought that bike for us, and it was a big surprise because he made the purchase suddenly.

The sentence begins with 'Is I had' which incorrectly uses the auxiliary 'Is' and the subject pronoun 'I' in a question form; this should be a simple past statement. 'Brought' is not incorrect but 'bought' is the intended verb for purchasing. The phrase 'a very surprised one for us' uses 'surprised' (an adjective describing people) instead of 'surprise' (the noun). 'That is a sudden purchased, made by my father' mixes noun and verb forms and uses passive awkwardly; rephrase to 'he made the purchase suddenly' or 'he bought it suddenly.' Suggestion: form a clear past simple statement ('I had...','My father bought...'), use 'bought' for purchase, use 'surprise' as noun, and keep clauses short and parallel.

× Yes bikes are popular in my country. Electric bike are getting more popular nowadays because of umm fuels reduction so many most of the people are using umm E bikes nowadays so it is good for our environment and.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Electric bikes are becoming more popular nowadays because of fuel reductions, so many people are using e-bikes. This is good for our environment.

The first sentence needs a comma after 'Yes' but the main error is in 'Electric bike are' where the plural subject 'Electric bikes' must take the plural verb 'are' — also the noun should be plural. 'Getting' is acceptable but 'becoming' is more formal. 'Fuels reduction' is incorrect collocation; use 'fuel reduction' or 'reductions'. 'Many most of the people' is redundant; use 'many people' or 'most people'. 'E bikes' should be 'e-bikes' or 'e bikes' consistently; choose 'e-bikes'. The final clause was incomplete: finish the sentence as 'This is good for our environment.' Suggestions: ensure subject and verb number match, avoid redundant quantifiers, and complete sentences.