Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and does not follow the Basic Structure rule. Give a direct topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details (where, who you rode with, or a memory) and keep it under five sentences. Use a linking word if you add details (for example, “and” or “because”). Also avoid single-word answers in the exam — they sound abrupt.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a small red bike that I often rode to my friend’s house after school, and I learned to ride it in our local park with my older brother.

제안: Your answer starts to give reasons but is unclear and disfluent. Organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because” and “for example”). Avoid filler words (‘uh’, ‘umm’) and vague phrases (‘a lot’). Use precise vocabulary like “infrastructure”, “bike lanes”, or “short-distance commuting”.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we have extensive bike lanes and many people use bicycles for short commutes. For example, in my city there are dedicated paths and public-bike schemes, so cycling is convenient and safe for daily travel.

× Yes it is, since our country is well known for, uh, being accessible for bicycle and also since, umm, there is a lot of a lot.

✓ Yes, they are, since our country is well known for being accessible for bicycles and also because there are a lot of them.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun and number agreement: 'Yes it is' refers to singular 'it' while 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they are'. 'Accessible for bicycle' is incorrect; use 'accessible for bicycles' or better 'accessible by bicycle' — plural form required for general statements. The phrase 'there is a lot of a lot' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'there are a lot of them' to refer back to bikes (plural), which also corrects subject-verb agreement ('there are' for plural). Use 'because' or 'since' once to link reasons; avoid filler words. Suggestions: ensure pronouns match the noun number (they/them for bikes), use plural nouns for general references, and use 'there is/there are' appropriately depending on singular/plural subjects.