Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but too brief and repetitive. Add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, who taught you, how often you rode) and use a linking word to make it more natural. Keep the response under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and my father taught me to ride it when I was six. Because I lived near a park, I used to ride it there almost every afternoon.

제안: The idea is clear but the sentence is repetitive and lacks specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give one or two concrete reasons or observations to support your opinion. Vary vocabulary to avoid repeating phrases.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see delivery riders and commuters cycling to work, especially in the mornings and evenings.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country and I always see someone ride a bike on the street in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country and I always see someone riding a bike on the street in my country.

The verb phrase 'see someone ride' is grammatically acceptable in some contexts, but when describing habitual observation in the present continuous sense, 'see someone riding' is more natural. The original mixes simple present habitual 'always see' with a bare infinitive 'ride'; using the present participle 'riding' matches the ongoing action you regularly observe. Suggestion: use 'seeing someone riding' or keep 'I always see someone riding a bike' for natural present-tense habitual description.