Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, reduce hesitations, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was common where I grew up, so many children owned one. In fact, my grandfather taught me to ride when I was about six, and I practiced in the neighborhood park until I felt confident.

제안: Clarify your opinion and use precise vocabulary. Avoid contradiction (you said bikes not popular but then said bicycles are convenient). Give a clear reason and one specific example or comparison, and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I don't think traditional bicycles are very popular in my country. Because the climate is very hot, many people prefer motorcycles or electric scooters for faster, cooler travel. For example, commuters often choose motorcycles for longer journeys, while bicycles are mainly used for short trips or exercise.

× Oh, of course bicycle is uh, is uh, is not a special thing in my country and my grandfather teach me how to ride a bicycle.

✓ Oh, of course, a bicycle is, uh, not a special thing in my country, and my grandfather taught me how to ride a bicycle.

Errors: missing indefinite article before 'bicycle' and missing comma placement; verb tense and subject-verb agreement. According to the provided list, apply 'Article errors' (ID 22) for the missing 'a' before 'bicycle' and 'Past tense issue' (ID 5) for 'teach' which should be 'taught'. Also 'Subject-verb agreement' (ID 27) is relevant if 'teach' remained present. Correction details: add the article 'a' because 'bicycle' is a singular, countable noun and requires an article when first mentioned. Change 'teach' to 'taught' to match the past-tense context set by 'when you were a child' and 'my grandfather', indicating a past action. Add commas to reflect natural speech pauses. Suggestion: always use an article with singular countable nouns ('a/an/the') unless you mean the concept in general; match verb tense to the time frame (use past tense for completed actions in the past).

× I don't think so. My country is too hot, so motorcycle and bicycle is more convenient.

✓ I don't think so. My country is too hot, so motorcycles and bicycles are more convenient.

Errors: plural nouns without plural marking and verb agreement. According to the list, this fits 'Singular and plural issue' (ID 1) and 'Subject-verb agreement errors' (ID 27). 'Motorcycle and bicycle' refers to categories in general and should be plural: 'motorcycles and bicycles'. The verb must agree with the plural subject: use 'are' instead of 'is'. Suggestion: when talking about types of vehicles in general, use plural nouns and ensure the verb matches the plural subject; e.g., 'X and Y are more convenient.'