Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, more natural reply with one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use a linking word if you add extra information. For example, mention the type of bike, how often you used it or a brief memory to make your answer specific and engaging.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used it almost every day after school, and I remember riding around the park with my friends until it got dark.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons and a linking word (for example, "because" or "also"). Avoid vague phrasing like "some of them are going to image to ride a bike." Instead, explain who uses bikes and why. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, commuters often ride to work to avoid traffic, and many people cycle in parks at the weekend to stay healthy.

× In my opinion, I think yes, and some of them are going to image to ride a bike.

✓ In my opinion, yes, and some of them imagine riding a bike.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward structure. 'Are going to image to ride' mixes future construction 'are going to' with incorrect verb 'image' (should be 'imagine') and an unnecessary infinitive 'to ride'. Use present simple 'imagine' to describe a general tendency and follow it with a gerund 'riding' after 'imagine'. Also remove the redundant 'I think' when you already say 'In my opinion' or keep one: 'In my opinion, yes' is concise.

× It's a health sport I guess for an.

✓ I guess it is a healthy sport for people.

The phrase 'health sport' is incorrect; 'healthy' is the adjective that modifies 'sport'. The original also ends with 'for an' which is incomplete and ungrammatical. Reorder to 'I guess it is a healthy sport for people' to make a complete, natural sentence. Alternatively, 'I guess it is good for health' would also work.