Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a complete response with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Mention what kind of bike it was, how old you were when you got it, and a brief memory or reason why it mattered. Use linking words (e.g., "when", "because", "so") to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six years old, and I remember practicing in the park every weekend because my parents wanted me to learn to ride safely.

제안: Expand your answer with specific reasons and examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details such as who uses bikes (students, commuters), why they are popular (cheap, convenient, environmental), and a brief example or comparison. Use linking words like "because", "for example", or "also".

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short journeys. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic, and in some cities there are dedicated bike lanes which makes cycling safer and more convenient.

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The definite article 'the' before 'bikes' is unnecessary when speaking about bikes in general. Use zero article with plural countable nouns to express general statements (e.g., 'Dogs are friendly', 'Cars are expensive'). Suggestion: omit 'the' when referring to the category as a whole: 'bikes are popular'. This keeps the sentence natural and fits the present-tense generality of the question.