Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: إجابتك كانت مجرد تكرار لسؤال الفاحص ولا تعطِي إجابة. لتحسين ذلك، أجب مباشرة بجميلة موضوعية ثم أضف تفاصيل قصيرة ومحددة. مثلاً ابدأ بـ"Yes, I did" أو "No, I didn't" ثم اذكر متى وكيف أو سبب. احرص أن لا تتجاوز 3-4 جمل، واستخدم روابط بسيطة مثل "because" أو "so" لتوضيح الفكرة.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which I used to ride around my neighborhood every day. Because my parents lived close to a park, I often practiced there with my friends.

제안: إجابتك قصيرة جدًا وتفتقر إلى تفاصيل وأمثلة. لتحسينها، ابدأ بجملة واضحة تعبر عن رأيك ثم أضف سببًا أو مثالًا يدعم رأيك باستخدام كلمات ربط مثل "because", "for example" أو "also". حاول أن تقدم مقارنة أو نتيجة لتكون الإجابة أكثر إقناعًا وطبيعية.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and avoid traffic. For example, in cities you can see lots of students and delivery workers riding bikes, and there are also more bike lanes being built nowadays.

× Yeah, sure. It's very popular.

✓ Yes, sure. They're very popular.

The student refers to bikes (plural), so the pronoun and verb must be plural. 'It's' is singular (it is) and incorrectly agrees with the plural noun 'bikes'. Use 'they're' (they are) to match plural subject. Also 'Yeah' is informal; use 'Yes' in a test context. Suggestion: identify the subject number (singular/plural) and ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number; replace singular contractions with plural ones when referring to plural nouns.