Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good answer: clear topic sentence, relevant details, coherent timeline and conciseness. To improve further, vary your sentence structures slightly and add a brief specific detail (e.g., what park or what made you confident) using a linking phrase to sound more natural and precise. Also avoid minor redundancy like repeating 'on my own' and 'without any help'.

예시: No, I didn't own a bike as a child; instead, I borrowed my neighbor's to learn. I practiced every weekend in the local riverside park, and after months of steady effort — especially learning to balance and brake properly — I felt confident enough to cycle independently by age ten.

제안: The idea is relevant, but the response has grammatical problems, hesitation fillers, and vague phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, removing filler words, and giving two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Add a brief example or statistic if possible. Aim for smoother phrasing and correct collocations (e.g., 'doesn't need gas' or 'doesn't use petrol').

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, many people use them for daily commuting because bikes are cheap and don't use petrol; secondly, they are valued as a healthy form of exercise, so you often see people cycling in parks and on bike lanes during the morning.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because it's one of the most used transportation in everyday living and because it doesn't need to have a gas so and and it and it's a form of exercise.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because they are one of the most used forms of transportation in everyday life, they do not need gas, and they are a good form of exercise.

Errors: incorrect quantifier/measure phrase 'one of the most used transportation' and awkward noun forms; incorrect pronoun and agreement 'it's' referring to 'bikes'; extra filler words 'so and and it and'. Suggestions: use plural agreement 'they' for 'bikes'; use the countable phrase 'forms of transportation'; use 'everyday life' instead of 'everyday living'; replace 'doesn't need to have a gas' with 'do not need gas' for clear modal/negation; remove filler words and join ideas with commas and 'and'. This keeps subject-verb agreement and correct quantification.

× No, I didn't have my own bike, but I used to borrow one from a neighbor so I could learn to ride.

✓ No, I didn't have my own bike, but I used to borrow one from a neighbor so I could learn to ride.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. Subject-verb agreement between 'I' and verbs 'didn't have' and 'used to borrow' is correct. No correction necessary. Keep past habitual 'used to' for repeated past actions.