Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (use 'ridden' or 'rode'), avoid repetition, and give one or two brief specific reasons. Use a linking word to connect reason(s).

예시: No, I never had a bike when I was a child. Because I'm still 17 and don't have a driving licence, my parents didn’t allow me to get one, so I never learned to ride.

제안: Answer directly, avoid filler words and repetition, use correct grammar and quantifiers, and add a specific example or comparison. Use a linking word to structure your supporting detail.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In my hometown almost everyone owns one, especially teenagers, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips; for example, most students cycle to school every day.

× No, I've never rode on a bike or had a bike because I have no license and also I'm I'm just a 17 years old teenage girl so my parents don't allow me to have a bike and that's why I think.

✓ No, I've never ridden a bike or had a bike because I do not have a license and I'm just a 17-year-old girl, so my parents do not allow me to have a bike.

The phrase 'I've never rode' uses the simple past form 'rode' after 'have,' which requires the past participle 'ridden' (Grammar Problem Type ID 9). Also correct 'I've' with 'I do not have' to match the present state (this is a clarity adjustment, not a different listed type). Use '17-year-old' as a compound adjective before 'girl.' Suggestions: use present perfect with past participle ('have never ridden'), use hyphens in age expressions, and avoid repeated words like 'I'm I'm.'

× Yes, I think that my I believe that my country is so popular of bikes because nearly approximately all the people that lives in my hometown has a bike, especially people on my ages.

✓ Yes, I believe my country is very fond of bikes because almost everyone in my hometown has a bike, especially people my age.

The phrase 'popular of bikes' is incorrect; use 'fond of' or 'popular for' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'Nearly approximately' is redundant; choose one adverb. 'All the people that lives' has subject-verb agreement and relative pronoun issues: 'people' is plural so use 'who live' or simply 'everyone' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 12). 'Has a bike' should be 'have a bike' with plural subject. 'People on my ages' is incorrect; use 'people my age.' Suggestions: use 'almost everyone' for generalization, ensure subject-verb agreement ('people... have'), and use correct prepositional/adjective phrases for age.'

× Yeah, and I also want to get a one, but yeah, I don't know.

✓ Yes, I would also like to get one, but I'm not sure.

The phrase 'get a one' incorrectly uses the indefinite article with a pronoun; use 'get one' or 'get a bike' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). 'Yeah' is informal; 'I'm not sure' is clearer than 'I don't know.' Suggestions: use 'one' without 'a' when substituting a previously mentioned noun, and prefer clearer modal constructions like 'would like' or 'want.'