Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan ada kesalahan tense. Gunakan kalimat topik yang menjawab langsung lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung dengan detail (mis. kapan Anda mendapatkannya, bagaimana perasaannya, atau siapa yang memberikannya). Perbaiki tense menjadi past tense untuk pengalaman masa lalu dan hindari kata yang tidak perlu.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighbourhood. It helped me feel independent and I often rode with my friends.

제안: Jawaban tidak jelas, penuh kebingungan dan tidak menjawab langsung. Latih untuk memberikan pendapat singkat (topik sentence) lalu dukung dengan alasan spesifik dan contoh. Hindari mengulang kata atau ragu-ragu; gunakan linking words sederhana seperti "because" atau "for example".

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students ride to school to save money and time.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Change 'have' (present) to 'had' (past simple) to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple verbs when referring to completed actions or states in the past. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× I think bikes a bike are umm, spelled on tail.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confused: 'bikes a bike are umm, spelled on tail' has incorrect word order and meaningless phrase 'spelled on tail.' The examiner asked about popularity, so respond directly: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' This uses subject-verb agreement and clear adjective placement. Suggestion: listen to the question and produce a simple, relevant sentence: subject + verb + complement; avoid filler words and unclear phrases. (Grammar problem type ID:26)