Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and grammatical: answer directly, use a simple topic sentence, then give one or two short supporting details. Correct verb forms and word choices (e.g., "couldn't" not "can't", "control it" not "control by"). Avoid contradiction: you said you didn't have a bike but then said you had a bicycle — choose one and explain. Keep to fewer than five sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't balance on two wheels. As a result, my parents bought me a small tricycle until I was old enough to learn. Later, when I was about eight, I finally learned to ride a bicycle.

제안: Make your statement precise and support it with a reason or example. Use correct grammar and concise linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so"). Avoid vague phrases like "age of 19 or 20"; say "people in their late teens" or give a clearer group. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short commutes. For example, many people in their late teens and twenties choose motorcycles or scooters to get to work or college quickly and cheaply.

× 'No, I didn't have bike when I was a child because when I was a child I can't control by.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was a child I couldn't control it.'

'a bike' needs the indefinite article 'a' before the singular count noun 'bike'. Also 'can't' is present tense and inconsistent with 'when I was a child'; change to past 'couldn't'. 'control by' is incorrect preposition and verb combination for meaning; the correct object pronoun is 'it'. Suggestion: use 'a' for singular countable nouns, match tense to past events, and use correct pronoun objects.'

× 'No, I didn't have bike when I was a child because when I was a child I can't control by.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was a child I couldn't control it.'

'can't' is present tense modal; the sentence refers to a past ability so it must be 'couldn't'. Use past modals for past events: 'couldn't' instead of 'can't'.'

× 'No, I didn't have bike when I was a child because when I was a child I can't control by.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was a child I couldn't control it.'

'control by' is not correct in this context; control takes a direct object (control something) rather than 'control by'. Replace with the object pronoun 'it' to refer to the bike. Avoid using 'by' after 'control' here.'

× 'Yes, this is a very popular vehicle in my country.'

✓ 'Yes, it is a very popular vehicle in my country.'

'This' is awkward in answer to the question; using 'it' is natural when referring to 'bikes' in general. No article change needed here, but pronoun choice improves naturalness.'

× 'Most of the people age of 19 or 20, they prefer to buy a bike because they love it so much and it is a great vehicle to.'

✓ 'Most people aged 19 or 20 prefer to buy a bike because they love them so much and it is a great vehicle too.'

'Most of the people' should be 'Most people' for generalization. 'age of 19 or 20' should be 'aged 19 or 20'. Remove the extra subject 'they' because 'Most people' already is the subject. 'love it' should be 'love them' if referring to bikes (plural/general). 'to' at end is incorrect; use 'too' to mean 'also'. Suggestions: use 'Most people aged...' and keep subject-verb alignment and correct pronouns and adverbs.'

× 'Most of the people age of 19 or 20, they prefer to buy a bike because they love it so much and it is a great vehicle to.'

✓ 'Most people aged 19 or 20 prefer to buy bikes because they love them so much and they are great vehicles too.'

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