Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and avoid hesitation and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the grammar (use "when I was a child"), and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Keep the whole answer within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I had a red bicycle that I rode to school and around the neighborhood. For example, I used to ride it every afternoon to visit my friends.

제안: Correct subject–verb agreement and reduce hesitation. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "because of". Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "mode of transport", "commute") and avoid filler words.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short commutes. For instance, many people use bikes to travel to work or markets in busy city areas because they avoid traffic and cost less than motor transport.

× Yes, I did uh, have a bike when when a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence has missing subject and auxiliary redundancy and repetition ('when when a child'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correct form includes the subject 'I' and the past continuous indicator 'was' to show the state 'when I was a child' and removes filler 'uh' and duplicate words. Suggestion: include the subject and a proper past-tense verb phrase ('was a child') and avoid repeated words.

× In my opinion, uh bikes is the most popular uh, transport in my country.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are the most popular means of transport in my country.

The original uses singular verb 'is' with plural subject 'bikes', causing a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27). Also 'transport' as a countable/uncountable noun is awkward; 'means of transport' or 'mode of transport' is more natural. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verb 'are' and use a natural collocation like 'means of transport'.

× Uh, several people prefer uh bikes uh, to the move uh, in city.

✓ Several people prefer bikes for getting around the city.

This sentence has multiple preposition and phrasing errors (ID 11). 'Prefer ... to' requires two items (prefer A to B) or 'prefer A for B', but the intended meaning is choice of transport for moving around a city. Also 'the move in city' is ungrammatical; use 'getting around the city' or 'moving around the city'. Suggestion: use 'prefer bikes for getting around the city' or 'prefer bikes to cars for moving around the city' depending on intended comparison.