Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear about tense and basic sentence structure, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details. Start with a direct topic sentence (past tense), then add specific supporting details with linking words. Pronoun and article use should be corrected (e.g., say “I had an orange bike” not “I have”).

예시: Yes, I had an orange bike when I was a child. It had a large basket at the front, which I used to carry my toys, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Remove fillers like “umm” and complete your reasons (e.g., health, environment, convenience). Use correct verb forms and pluralization.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work because it is cheaper and faster in crowded cities, and it also reduces air pollution and improves fitness.

× Actually I have the orange 1 and I like it very much.

✓ Actually I had an orange one and I liked it very much.

The question asks about childhood, so past tense and correct article/word choice are needed. 'Have' should be past 'had' (Past tense issue, ID 5), 'the' is incorrect before a non-specific singular countable noun here and should be 'an' (Article errors, ID 22), and '1' appears to be a numeral used as a word; use 'one'. Also change 'like' to past 'liked' to match past context. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and choose the correct indefinite article before vowel sounds.

× It was have have a very huge bucket and I like it.

✓ It had a very large basket and I liked it.

The sentence contains several errors: 'was have have' is ungrammatical; the correct past of 'have' is 'had' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'Huge' is acceptable but 'large' or 'big' is more natural collocation for a 'basket'; 'bucket' for a bike is unusual—'basket' is better. 'I like it' should be past 'I liked it' to match past context. Also remove the duplicated words. Suggestion: Use simple past verbs and choose appropriate nouns for the object.

× Yes, umm, the bikes are popular in my country and people who have I known and other people like to ride a bike because umm, they help the air keeps clean and they can.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. People I know and many others like to ride bikes because they help keep the air clean.

Multiple problems: 'the bikes are popular' is acceptable but 'bikes are popular' is more natural (Article errors, ID 22). 'people who have I known' is incorrect word order and tense; correct is 'people I know' (Incorrect use of pronouns / sentence structure, IDs 12 and 26) and present simple 'know' fits a general fact (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'Like to ride a bike' can be pluralized to 'ride bikes' for generalization (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'They help the air keeps clean' mixes structures: use 'help keep the air clean' (Verb + -ing or base verb after help; here base verb 'keep' is correct; this is Verb + -ing/form issue, ID 8). The trailing 'and they can' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: Use correct word order, keep present simple for general facts, use base form after 'help', and remove incomplete clauses.