Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be sure to answer in the past tense and expand slightly with a topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words if you add details. Aim for 2–4 short sentences and avoid simple one-word or grammatically incorrect replies.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I rode it to school most days. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them within a few weeks.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, because, for example, in fact). Avoid vague or awkward phrasing; say “bicycles” or “bikes in my country” and explain why they are popular.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or school, and cities have many bike lanes to make cycling safer.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'). The student used present tense 'have' instead of past tense 'had'. This is a tense error. Use past tense to match the time reference: 'had'. Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers in the question (e.g., 'when you were a child') and use the corresponding past tense form of the verb.

× Yeah, exactly. My country bike is so popular.

✓ Yes. Bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and article use: 'My country bike' is not a correct noun phrase in English. Also 'so popular' is informal and 'exactly' is unnecessary here. The intended meaning is a general statement about bikes in the country, so use the plural 'Bikes' and the prepositional phrase 'in my country'. Suggestion: Use 'Bikes are very popular in my country' for a clear, grammatically correct general statement. Replace 'so' with 'very' for neutral formality and avoid misplaced possessive structures like 'my country bike'.