Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct repetition, and provide clearer, coherent supporting details. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid contradictory statements (e.g., ‘cycle to work’ vs childhood), fix grammar (articles and prepositions), and limit to 3–4 sentences using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my birthday, and I rode it to school every day. I especially enjoyed cycling to the seaside on weekends because the route was scenic and I felt free.

제안: Avoid filler and repetition, give precise reasons and a short prediction or example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and choose accurate vocabulary (e.g., ‘infrastructure’). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars and the infrastructure is poor. For example, there are few bike lanes and busy roads make cycling unsafe, so most people choose motor vehicles.

× My father bought me on my birthday.

✓ My father bought it for me on my birthday.

The original sentence omits the object 'it' (the bike) and the appropriate preposition 'for' to indicate the recipient. Because the action is in the past, use past tense 'bought' (already correct) and include 'it' and 'for me' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: include the object and correct preposition: 'bought it for me on my birthday.'

× I used to cycle to work.

✓ I used to cycle to school.

Given the context asking about childhood, 'used to' expresses past habitual actions. 'I used to cycle to work' contradicts the rest of the response which mentions school; likely intended 'school.' The tense 'used to' is correct for past habit, but the noun should match context. Suggestion: ensure the noun (work/school) is consistent with the context.

× I used to cycle to school every day using my bike.

✓ I used to cycle to school every day on my bike.

The phrase 'using my bike' is grammatically acceptable but sounds redundant and awkward after 'cycle.' 'On my bike' is the natural collocation. The tense 'used to' is correct for past habitual action. Suggestion: replace 'using my bike' with 'on my bike' to improve naturalness and clarity.

× I had a great time cycling to school or to the seaside near my.

✓ I had a great time cycling to school or to the seaside near my home.

The sentence ends with 'near my' which is incomplete; a noun is required after the possessive determiner 'my.' Add 'home' (or 'house') to complete the phrase. Past tense 'had' is appropriate for past experience. Suggestion: finish the phrase with a noun, e.g., 'near my home.'

× Bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ Bikes are not very popular in my country.

The original is grammatically correct but slightly abrupt. Adding an adverb like 'very' better reflects typical spoken nuance when explaining relative popularity. Tense and plurality are correct. Suggestion: add context modifiers when describing degrees (not very popular).

× People in my in my country are used to driving cars and also the the the roads are not suitable for cycling.

✓ People in my country are used to driving cars, and also the roads are not suitable for cycling.

Errors: duplicated phrase 'in my in my' and repeated 'the the the' are redundancy/typing errors rather than grammatical category errors but interfere with clarity. Remove the duplicates. 'Used to driving' is correct (preposition 'to' + verb-ing). Maintain past or present habit: 'are used to driving' correctly indicates a current habit. Suggestion: eliminate duplicate words and keep punctuation: 'People in my country are used to driving cars, and the roads are not suitable for cycling.'

× They are all designed for motor vehicles.

✓ They are all designed for motor vehicles.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It matches the preceding explanation and uses passive voice appropriately. No change needed.