Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense and articles.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood every day. It helped me feel independent and stay active.

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and pronouns) and add specific supporting details and linking words to make the answer coherent. Mention examples or reasons why bikes are popular and avoid vague absolutes like "every" without evidence.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my city and across the country. For example, many families buy bikes for children for leisure and short trips, and there are dedicated bike lanes in several neighborhoods, which encourages people to cycle more.

× Yes, I had the I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence contains a past tense agreement error: 'were' is the past tense of 'to be' used with plural or subjunctive forms, but the correct past singular form for 'I' is 'was'. Also there is a duplicated phrase 'I had the I had' which is redundant. Remove the extra words and use 'was' to match the singular subject 'I'. Suggestion: say 'I had a bike when I was a child.' to be concise and grammatically correct.

× Yes, it is very popular on my in my country and in my city.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and in my city.

The original mixes pronouns and prepositions incorrectly. 'It' refers to a singular subject but 'bikes' is plural; use 'bikes are' for plural subject and correct preposition is 'in' not 'on' for countries/cities. Also remove 'my' before 'in my country' and keep 'in my country and in my city' or simply 'in my country and city.' Suggestion: use 'Bikes are very popular in my country and in my city.'

× Of course, I think every child nowadays have his own bike.

✓ Of course, I think every child nowadays has his or her own bike.

The subject 'every child' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' not 'have'. Also 'his' assumes gender; use 'his or her' or the singular 'their' for gender-neutral language. Suggestion: use 'every child has his or her own bike' or 'every child nowadays has their own bike.'