Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “buy Gala Overhouse”) and unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I owned a small bicycle that I often rode to the park. For example, my friends and I would ride together every afternoon, racing and practicing tricks, which helped me become more confident on two wheels.

제안: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Use correct sentence structure and specific examples or comparisons. Avoid mixing singular/plural and incorrect prepositions.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Thailand. Firstly, many people choose motorcycles or bicycles because they are more convenient in heavy traffic; secondly, they are far cheaper to run and maintain than cars, so a lot of commuters prefer them.

× Absolutely yes. I love to buy Gala Overhouse when I was a child and I love to play with my friends like we buy together.

✓ Absolutely yes. I loved to buy a Gala Overhouse when I was a child, and I loved to play with my friends; we used to ride together.

Problems: past vs present tense and awkward verb choice. The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense (loved, used to ride). 'I love to buy' is incorrect for a past habit. 'Buy' is the wrong verb for using a bike; 'ride' is correct. Also missing article: 'a Gala Overhouse'. Suggested improvement: match tense to the time frame (use past tense for past habits), choose appropriate verbs (ride for using a bike), and include articles where needed. Use 'used to' or 'would' to describe habitual past actions.

× In my view is yes, because of in Thailand we've got a lot of bicycle and the motorcycle because it's more convenient than a ride a car and we can save our money more than the car.

✓ In my view, yes. In Thailand we have a lot of bicycles and motorcycles because they are more convenient than riding a car, and we can save more money than with a car.

Problems: word order, pronouns, articles, plural forms, and gerund usage. 'In my view is yes' has incorrect word order; place the verb after subject or use a short answer 'yes'. 'We've got a lot of bicycle and the motorcycle' contains singular/plural errors and unnecessary definite article; use 'bicycles and motorcycles'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to the vehicles. 'A ride a car' should be 'riding a car' (gerund) and 'save our money more than the car' is unclear—use 'save more money than with a car'. Suggested improvement: simplify the structure, use correct plural nouns, use gerunds for actions (riding), and compare with 'with a car' to make the comparison clear.