Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two brief supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural, concise and avoid repetition. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe one specific memory or reason, and use words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend because my parents wanted me to exercise and have fun.

제안: Your answer gives an opinion and a reason, which is good, but contains grammatical errors, redundancies and unclear word choices. Improve by correcting grammar, using precise vocabulary (e.g. "rely on", "MTR trains", "minibuses"), and adding one concrete example or brief comparison. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to make the explanation coherent.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong because most people rely on efficient public transport. For example, many commuters prefer MTR trains and minibuses, especially during rush hour, so riding a bike is less practical in crowded urban areas.

× I don't think bikes are really popular in Hong Kong because people mainly require re relied on public transport and like MTR bars and minibus stores.

✓ I don't think bikes are really popular in Hong Kong because people mainly rely on public transport and use the MTR and minibuses.

The original sentence has multiple issues falling under pronoun and verb usage categories. 'Require re relied' is ungrammatical: 'require' is wrong and 're relied' appears to be a typo and incorrect verb form. The correct verb is 'rely' (present tense) to match 'people' and present-time general statement. Also 'like MTR bars and minibus stores' is incorrect vocabulary and structure: native expressions are 'use the MTR and minibuses' meaning they use those modes of transport. Suggestion: use 'rely on' for dependence, and 'use the MTR and minibuses' for the specific transport types. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('people rely'), correct verb choice ('rely on' not 'require'), and correct nouns ('MTR' and 'minibuses').