Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer conveys the basic idea but has many grammatical errors, unclear phrases and lacks coherence. Keep answers within 3–5 clear sentences: start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Be careful with verb tenses (use past tense for childhood), correct word choice (bike, back → bike; used too much → used it a lot; study → practice; can ready write → could ride and stop), and sentence structure. Practice short, clear sentences and use linking words like 'then' or 'after that' to show sequence.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it a lot to play and travel around my neighborhood. At first I couldn't ride very well, but after a month of practice my father helped me and I learned to ride confidently.

제안: Your answer gives a simple opinion but has grammar and clarity problems. Use a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details. Correct plural and article usage (many families have bikes), and explain why they are useful with examples (short trips, low cost, convenience). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to make your point coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. Many families own at least one bike because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, people often cycle to markets or schools, especially in smaller cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yes, I have a back when I was a child and I used too much to study it and in the beginning I can ready write it correctly but one month later my father helped me and I got it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it a lot to practice, and at the beginning I could not read or write it correctly, but one month later my father helped me and I got it.

Multiple errors: 'have' with 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'had' (past tense issue, ID 5). 'back' is a typo for 'bike' (vocabulary). 'used too much to study it' is incorrect structure; use 'used it a lot to practice' (verb + -ing/usage issue, ID 8). 'can ready write it correctly' mixes modal tense and forms; since past time is referenced, use past ability 'could not read or write it correctly' (third person singular/ability and past tense issues, IDs 2 and 5). Overall suggestion: keep past tense consistent for events in childhood, use correct verbs for actions (practice, read, write) and correct noun 'bike'.

× Of course, in China a lot of family have a bike.

✓ Of course, in China many families have bikes.

'a lot of family' is incorrect; 'family' should be plural 'families' when referring to many households (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'a bike' becomes 'bikes' to match plural subject or alternatively keep singular with 'each' (agreement). Use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' before a plural noun for formality. Suggestion: say 'many families have bikes' to be grammatically correct and natural.

× And then it's pretty useful for one of us.

✓ And it is very useful for many of us.

The phrase 'for one of us' is unclear and likely incorrect pronoun/reference; the student probably meant 'for many of us' or 'for most of us' (incorrect use of pronouns/quantifier, IDs 12 and 14). Also use 'very' instead of 'pretty' for clarity. Suggestion: choose a clear quantifier to match intended meaning and keep pronoun reference consistent.