Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense/use of articles and prepositions, avoid repetition (e.g., "I" twice). Keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child and I often rode it with my neighbors and friends. However, I now travel by motorcycle or car because I live much farther from school and the distances are too long to cycle.

제안: Answer directly, use clearer comparison language and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "however" or "because" once, and avoid repetition. Use plural forms correctly ("motorcycles"), and provide one specific supporting detail.

예시: Bikes are fairly popular, but motorcycles and cars are more common. For example, many people prefer motorcycles because they are faster for long commutes between suburbs and city centers.

× I used to ride it around my neighbors with friends of course, but now I I am only travel by motor or car because I live farther from school and need to cover longer distance.

✓ I used to ride it around my neighborhood with friends, of course, but now I only travel by motorcycle or car because I live farther from school and need to cover a longer distance.

Errors: 'neighbors' should be 'neighborhood' (wrong plural noun meaning) and 'motor' should be 'motorcycle' (word choice). Also missing 'a' before 'longer distance'. Suggestion: use 'neighborhood' to refer to the area, use 'motorcycle' for clarity, and include the article 'a' before 'longer distance'. Also remove the duplicated 'I' and change word order to 'only travel'.

× I used to ride it around my neighbors with friends of course, but now I I am only travel by motor or car because I live farther from school and need to cover longer distance.

✓ I used to ride it around my neighborhood with friends, of course, but now I only travel by motorcycle or car because I live farther from school and need to cover a longer distance.

Error: verb form 'am only travel' is ungrammatical; 'am' plus base verb requires '-ing' (continuous) or use simple present 'only travel'. Suggestion: use simple present 'now I only travel' to contrast past habitual action with current habitual action.

× I used to ride it around my neighbors with friends of course, but now I I am only travel by motor or car because I live farther from school and need to cover longer distance.

✓ I used to ride it around my neighborhood with friends, of course, but now I only travel by motorcycle or car because I live farther from school and need to cover a longer distance.

Error: missing article 'a' before 'longer distance'. Suggestion: include 'a longer distance' to make the noun phrase grammatical.

× I think it's popular, but motors and cars are more popular because it helps.

✓ I think bicycles are popular, but motorcycles and cars are more popular because they are more useful.

Error: pronoun 'it' refers to plural 'motors and cars' but uses singular 'it' and 'helps'. Suggestion: use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'help' or rephrase to 'because they are more useful' for clarity. Also 'motors' is better as 'motorcycles' and specify 'bicycles' instead of 'it'.

× It helps us a lot when we have to commute around the area because it's longer distance.

✓ They help us a lot when we have to commute around the area because the distances are longer.

Errors: 'It' refers ambiguously to plural vehicles; use 'They'. 'it's longer distance' is ungrammatical; use 'the distances are longer' or 'the distance is longer'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun and use appropriate singular/plural noun phrase.