Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve akıcı bir ifade için biraz genişletilebilir. Konu cümlesinden sonra kısa bir detay veya örnek ekleyin (ne zaman sürmeye başladığınız, bisikleti kimin aldığı veya bisikletle ilgili unutulmaz bir anı). Ayrıca, "yeah" yerine daha nötr bir başlangıç ("Yes, I did" veya "I did") kullanarak daha resmi bir ton elde edebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friends.

제안: Cevap fikir veriyor fakat karışık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından nedenlerini bağlaçlarla sırayla açıklayın. Örneğin, ülke genelinde popüler olmadığını söyleyip, kontrast oluşturmak için kendi şehrinizdeki durumu belirtin. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini ("um", "uh", "I don't know") azaltın.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular across the country, because most people prefer cars for commuting. However, in my city bikes are quite common, especially along the seaside where many residents cycle in the mornings and evenings for exercise and leisure.

× Umm, In my opinion, it's not much popular like as in Europe or I don't know, maybe in America, but I think it's popular in my city usually because we have a, a seaside here and people likes to ride their bikes on mornings or nights in this uh.

✓ Umm, in my opinion, it is not as popular as in Europe or, I don't know, maybe America, but I think it is usually popular in my city because we have a seaside here and people like to ride their bikes in the mornings or at night.

Errors and suggestions: 1) 'it's not much popular like as in Europe' is ungrammatical for comparison. Use 'not as popular as in Europe' to form the correct comparative structure with 'as ... as'. 2) Capitalization: 'In' mid-sentence should be lowercase 'in'. 3) Redundant words: remove 'like' after 'as' and unnecessary 'maybe in'. 4) 'I think it's popular in my city usually' has awkward adverb placement; move 'usually' before the adjective 'popular' or before the verb: 'is usually popular' for natural word order. 5) 'people likes' is subject-verb agreement error (third person plural 'people' requires 'like'). 6) Time expressions: use 'in the mornings' or 'at night' rather than 'on mornings or nights'. Improvements: 'it is not as popular as in Europe', 'it is usually popular in my city', 'people like', and 'in the mornings'/'at night'.