Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but very short and lacks support. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add one or two brief supporting details (reason, memory, or contrast). Use a linking word if adding details. Keep it natural and avoid filler sounds like "umm."

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because our house was nearby, and my parents preferred me to be careful on the busy roads.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but it repeats phrases and has informal fillers. Improve coherence by using a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating "because," and add a specific example or brief comparison. Use linking words (for example, however) if needed, and vary vocabulary (e.g., convenient, efficient). Limit to about 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are a convenient way to get around congested cities. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to weave through traffic, which is faster than driving during rush hour.

× Yes I do, because bikes are very comfortable for my country, because my country is big and when it's traffic, bikes are so so comfortable.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very convenient in my country because the country is large and when there is traffic, bikes are very convenient.

The original sentence has several grammar issues: 1) 'are very comfortable for my country' uses 'comfortable' incorrectly for vehicles — 'convenient' is more appropriate. 2) 'my country is big' is acceptable but 'the country is large' is more natural. 3) 'when it's traffic' is ungrammatical; the correct structure is 'when there is traffic' using the existential 'there is' (There be issue, ID 3). 4) Repetition of 'because' is redundant; combine clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'there is traffic' and replace 'comfortable' with 'convenient' to convey intended meaning; add commas and 'I think' to match the question about opinion. Note: This correction targets problem types ID 2 and 3 from the provided list.