Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct past-tense response and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details with correct tense and concise phrasing. Avoid repetition and keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, and I usually walked to school or took the bus. I wished I had a bike because it would have made getting around more fun and independent.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Correct grammar (adjective form, articles) and avoid repeating phrases. Keep answers concise and logically linked.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, there are few dedicated bike lanes, so riding feels unsafe. Moreover, urban planning and public policy prioritize cars over cycling, so people rarely choose bikes for daily travel.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for actions or states in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child').

× No, I don't think so because our country is never really a bicycle friendly.

✓ No, I don't think so because our country is not really bicycle-friendly.

The phrase 'is never really a bicycle friendly' is ungrammatical: 'never' conflicts with 'is' in this context and 'bicycle-friendly' is a compound adjective that needs a hyphen. Use 'is not really bicycle-friendly' to state the general lack of friendliness toward bicycles. Suggestion: use 'is not' for negative descriptions and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns.

× We don't have a separate lane on the road for the bicycles and it's not really a priority for our country and our country, I mean.

✓ We don't have a separate bike lane on the road, and it's not really a priority for our country.

'A separate lane on the road for the bicycles' is wordy and uses an unnecessary article with 'bicycles'; 'bike lane' is the common term. The original repeats 'our country' and adds 'I mean' which is redundant. Combine clauses with a comma and 'and' for clarity and remove repetition. Suggestion: use concise, idiomatic phrases ('a separate bike lane') and avoid repeating the same phrase or adding filler like 'I mean' in formal responses.