Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is grammatically correct and direct, but it is very brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, add one or two specific details (reason, memory or consequence) and use a linking word to connect sentences. Keep responses natural and within five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often borrowed my neighbour's bike on weekends, and I remember learning to ride in the park near my house.

제안: The answer expresses an opinion but is informal and vague. Improve by using neutral, precise language, explain why bikes are less popular, and give a specific example or comparison. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and avoid phrases like "kind of forbidden" — instead describe cultural or safety reasons.

예시: No, bikes aren't very popular in my country, especially among women, because of cultural norms and safety concerns. For example, many cities lack safe cycling paths, so most people prefer cars or public transport rather than riding a bicycle.

× No, that's the problem. It's not very popular in my country, especially for female, it's kind of forbidden.

✓ No, that's the problem. Bicycles are not very popular in my country, especially for females; it's kind of forbidden for them.

The original sentence uses 'for female' which is an incorrect use of a noun/ pronoun form. Use the plural noun 'females' or the phrase 'for women' and include a clear subject for the second clause. Also 'it's not very popular' refers to 'bicycles' (plural), so match that reference by using 'Bicycles are not...' and clarify 'for them' to indicate who is forbidden. Suggestion: use 'women' or 'girls' depending on meaning and keep consistent plural agreement.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

This sentence is already grammatically correct regarding singular/plural usage. The singular 'a bike' correctly matches the negative past tense 'didn't have'. No change needed. (Included here to acknowledge no error under the provided list.)