Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically accurate, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (use past tense for past events) and unnecessary superlatives.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and we practised riding together in the park every weekend. That time remains one of my fondest childhood memories because it helped me bond with him and enjoy being outdoors.

제안: Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with specific and grammatical reasons. Use appropriate verb forms and subject-verb agreement, and add a linking word to connect ideas. Give one concrete example or brief explanation of why biking is popular (commuting, exercise, scenery).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, I see many people cycling to work and university every morning, which shows bikes are used for commuting. Also, cycling is popular as a leisure activity because it lets people exercise while enjoying local scenery.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' uses past tense. The student's answer should match that past-time reference. Using present tense 'do have' conflicts with the past context. Suggestion: Use past simple 'had' to describe possession in childhood.

× When I was a child it was a gift from my father on my 6th birthday and we have been.

✓ When I was a child it was a gift from my father on my sixth birthday and we practiced together.

This sentence mixes past simple ('was', 'was a gift') with an incorrect fragment 'we have been' which is incomplete and mismatched in tense. 'Have been' (present perfect) is inappropriate for a completed past action. Also use 'sixth' instead of numeric with ordinal form in formal speech. Suggestion: Use past simple 'practiced' to describe repeated actions that took place in the past.

× and it was the most sweetest memory of my life.

✓ and it was the sweetest memory of my life.

The phrase 'most sweetest' is a double superlative: 'sweetest' already expresses the superlative degree, so adding 'most' is redundant and ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use a single superlative adjective 'sweetest' or use 'very sweet' if emphasis without superlative is intended.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because I've seen people bike every morning on my way to my university

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because I see people cycling every morning on my way to university.

The student's use of 'do think' is grammatically acceptable but unnecessary; simpler present simple 'think' is preferred. The clause 'I've seen people bike every morning' mixes present perfect with a habitual action; for habitual actions use present simple 'I see' or present continuous. Also 'bike' as a verb is informal; 'cycle' is more natural. 'my university' can be shortened to 'university' in this context. Suggestion: Use present simple 'I see' for habitual actions and 'cycle' as the verb.

× and it is a great sport for people who likes to enjoy watching the scenery.

✓ and it is a great sport for people who like to enjoy watching the scenery.

The relative clause has a subject-verb agreement error: 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also 'enjoy watching the scenery' is acceptable, but ensure verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'people who like' to match plural subject with plural verb.