Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details. Correct tense errors (use past tense for childhood), avoid repetition, and fix article and number usage (e.g., "a" vs "an", "second or third" phrasing). Use linking words like "so" or "because" only when needed. Aim for 2–4 sentences, each clear and specific.

예시: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child; my parents gave it to me as a birthday present. I think it was for my second or third birthday, and at the time it felt amazing. It became a memorable gift because I rode it every day around the neighborhood.

제안: Be concise and use correct collocations and grammar. Use a clear topic sentence (Yes, they are popular) then provide two specific reasons with linking words (because / so / and). Replace phrases like "too much popular" and "saving their times" with "very popular" and "saving time." Avoid broken sentences; combine ideas coherently.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because cities are densely populated and road traffic is heavy. As a result, many people ride bikes to save time and avoid traffic jams. They are also convenient and inexpensive for short trips around town.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child, when I was a child, my parents give it to me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my parents gave it to me.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time reference 'when I was a child' (tense consistency). Also 'give' should be past 'gave' to match past time. Use past simple 'had' and 'gave' for completed past actions. Suggestion: keep verbs in the past when talking about past events (e.g., 'I had a bike' and 'my parents gave it to me').

× On my second, actually, I forget that it was a second or third birthday and it was a amazing bike in that time and it was a memorable gift for me.

✓ On my second — actually, I forget whether it was my second or third birthday — it was an amazing bike, and it was a memorable gift for me.

Multiple issues: tense and article. 'Forget' is present tense but refers to past event; use past 'forgot' if keeping past perspective, or keep 'I forget' only when speaking about present memory gap. Also 'a amazing' uses wrong article; before a vowel sound use 'an'. The corrected version preserves the speaker's present uncertainty ('I forget whether') but keeps description consistent. Alternatively, use 'I forgot whether it was my second or third birthday.' Suggestion: decide on perspective (present remembrance vs past narration) and use matching verb forms; use 'an' before vowel sounds ('an amazing').

× Yes, bikes are too much popular in my country because my country is densely populated and there are too much traffic in in our roads and that's why people use bikes for saving their times.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it is densely populated and there is too much traffic on our roads, and that's why people use bikes to save time.

Multiple problems: 'too much popular' is incorrect collocation; use 'very popular' or 'too popular'. 'Too much' modifies uncountable nouns, not adjectives. 'There are too much traffic' is wrong: 'traffic' is uncountable and requires 'is' not 'are', and use 'too much traffic' (with 'is'). Also 'in in our roads' wrong preposition and duplication; use 'on our roads'. 'Saving their times' is incorrect: use the infinitive purpose 'to save time' or 'to save their time' (time is uncountable here). Suggestion: use appropriate collocations and correct verb number with uncountable nouns, fix prepositions.

× And it was also comfort. Give them comfort and easy to move anywhere.

✓ It is also comfortable; it gives people comfort and makes it easy to move anywhere.

Errors: 'comfort' (noun) used where adjective 'comfortable' required. Sentence fragments: 'Give them comfort and easy to move anywhere' lacks subject-verb agreement and structure. Use 'it gives people comfort' and 'makes it easy to move anywhere' to create complete clauses. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and ensure each clause has a subject and verb ('it gives', 'it makes').