Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và chứa lỗi thời gian: bạn nói "have" nhưng hỏi về quá khứ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể (mô tả, cảm xúc, tần suất sử dụng, ai tặng). Sử dụng liên từ để nối câu và giữ 2–4 câu, tránh lặp lại từ đơn giản.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike when I was about eight years old. I used to ride it to my friend’s house almost every afternoon, and I remember feeling proud because it had a shiny bell. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, so I took very good care of it.

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn và chung chung; thiếu lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy nêu quan điểm rõ ràng, giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ/so sánh để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, for example, however). Giữ 2–4 câu, tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in my city you can see cyclists on dedicated bike lanes during rush hour, and many students prefer bikes because they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I have a red bike.

✓ Yes, I had a red bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Use 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past states or possessions, e.g., 'When I was a child, I had a red bike.'

× Yes, I see it everywhere in my country.

✓ Yes, I see them everywhere in my country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The pronoun must agree in number with the noun it replaces. Use 'them' for plural objects. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match the referenced noun's number: 'bikes' -> 'them'.