Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting reason or memory using a linking word. Avoid filler words like "Umm" and repeating negatives.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Because my family lived in a small apartment and we often walked or used public transport, I never needed one. However, I sometimes borrowed a friend's bike to ride in the park.

제안: Give a clear direct answer followed by specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "prefer cars due to hot climate and long distances") and correct small grammar mistakes.

예시: Not really; cars are more common in my country. In my region, the climate is very hot and many people travel long distances, so they prefer air-conditioned cars rather than bicycles.

× Umm, Unfortunately, no.

✓ Umm, unfortunately, no.

The sentence has incorrect capitalization; 'Unfortunately' should not be capitalized after a comma. This is a sentence punctuation/capitalization issue rather than a change in tense or grammar. Suggestion: use lowercase 'unfortunately' after a comma to keep proper sentence case.

× Maybe because I really didn't care about having a bicycle when I was a little child, so no.

✓ Maybe because I really didn't care about having a bicycle when I was a child, so no.

The phrase 'a little child' is unnatural; use 'a child' or 'young' instead. The past tense 'didn't care' is correct for the time frame. Suggestion: replace 'a little child' with 'a child' to sound natural.

× Not really, most of them have a car because in my country it's very hot so they prefer a car instead of by bike.

✓ Not really. Most people have a car because in my country it's very hot, so they prefer a car to a bike.

'Most of them' is unclear and awkward; 'most people' is a better subject. Also 'prefer a car instead of by bike' contains multiple issues: use 'prefer X to Y' for preferences, and 'by bike' is incorrect here—use 'a bike' as the object. Punctuation: split into two sentences or use commas for clarity. Suggestions: use 'most people' and the structure 'prefer a car to a bike.'