Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy, vocabulary, and clarity. Correct the tense (use past tense), spelling, and avoid irrelevant reasons unless they are true and explained. Give a direct topic sentence, then optionally one brief supporting detail with a linking word. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and why (family choice, cost, safety), or mention an alternative like walking or public transport. Keep the answer to 1–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe near our busy road, so I usually walked to school instead.

제안: Improve sentence structure, reduce repetition, and use linking words to organise ideas (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'also'). Use correct verbs and singular/plural forms. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (frequency, example of your father, reasons such as convenience or traffic). Keep it concise and avoid hesitations.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and to avoid traffic. For example, my father rides his bike to work every day, and I often see many cyclists on city streets.

× No, I don't have a buy when I'm child 'cause I'm a girl.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was a girl.

This sentence has multiple problems that fit listed types: present tense used instead of past (Present tense issue ID 6 vs Past tense issue ID 5), incorrect verb/item word 'buy' instead of 'bike' (word choice), incorrect subject-verb agreement with 'I'm child' and incorrect article use (Article errors ID 22). The speaker is referring to childhood, so past tense is required: use 'didn't have' and 'was'. Use the correct noun 'bike' instead of 'buy'. Include the article 'a' before 'child' and use 'because' instead of casual ' 'cause' for standard grammar. Suggestion: practice shifting verbs to past when describing past events and check nouns for correct spelling and meaning.

× Yeah, many times I saw bikers in the streets and cities in my countries, in my in my country and and to my dad have a bike and every day he drives to work.

✓ Yes, I often saw bikers in the streets and cities in my country, and my dad has a bike and drives to work every day.

This sentence contains several issues that match types: singular/plural and article errors (ID 1 and 22) — use 'my country' (singular) not 'my countries' and no repetition; tense consistency and verb form (Present tense issue ID 6 and Third person singular issue ID 2) — 'saw' is past while speaker then shifts to present; better to use simple past 'I often saw' or present perfect 'I have often seen' consistently. Also incorrect word order and redundancy (Sentence structure errors ID 26) — remove repeated 'in my in my country' and duplicate 'and and'. For the clause about the father, use third person singular present 'my dad has a bike' and 'drives to work every day' for habitual action. Suggestion: choose a consistent tense when describing habitual past or present observations, remove repeated words, and ensure subject-verb agreement for third person singular.