Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan kosakata untuk menjawab secara langsung dan lebih lancar. Hindari pengulangan filler (uh, um) dan perbaiki tata bahasa (mis. "when I was a child", "my friends mostly had them"). Tambahkan satu atau dua detail spesifik dengan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran, mis. alasan menggunakan sepeda atau kenangan singkat. Latihan: buat kalimat utama lalu satu atau dua supporting detail, total maksimal 3–4 kalimat.

예시: Yes, I did. Most of my friends had bikes, and we often rode them to school because we lived in a village where motorcycles were uncommon. I remember racing with my friends on weekends, which was a lot of fun.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kosakata yang lebih tepat (mis. "technology has developed", "people prefer motorcycles or cars"). Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung (because, so, therefore) dan hindari filler. Berikan contoh konkret seperti jarak perjalanan atau kondisi infrastruktur. Latihan: langsung jawab, beri alasan dengan satu atau dua detail spesifik dan tutup dengan kesimpulan singkat.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular now. As technology and incomes have risen, most people prefer motorcycles or cars because destinations are often far and public transport is limited. Therefore, bicycles are mostly used for recreation rather than daily commuting.

× OK, uh, of course I did because all of my friends mostly have it

✓ OK, uh, of course I did because most of my friends had one

The subject-verb agreement and noun choice: 'all of my friends mostly have it' is awkward and mismatches tense. The question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'had'. 'Most of my friends' is clearer than 'all of my friends mostly'. Use 'one' to refer to 'a bike'. Suggestion: match past tense and use natural quantifier order: 'most of my friends had one.'

× Uh, when I was child, I and my friend used our bike to go to school because our school is in the village, so it's uh, free for motorcycle and, uh, and.

✓ When I was a child, my friend and I used our bikes to go to school because our school was in the village, so motorcycles were allowed for free

Multiple issues: 'when I was child' needs the article 'a'. Pronoun order: 'my friend and I' is natural. Plural agreement: 'used our bikes' matches two people. Tense consistency: past tense 'was' for 'school' location. The phrase 'free for motorcycle' is unclear; likely meaning motorcycles were allowed free — use 'motorcycles were allowed for free' or 'motorcycles could pass for free'. Suggestion: keep past tense and correct article and word order. Note: only errors from the provided grammar list were corrected (articles, plural/singular, subject order, tense, sentence structure).

× Uh, I don't think so because umm, now technology is more development, so a lot of people in my country is preferred to use motorcycle or, or a car because, uh, maybe the mobilities is too far.

✓ I don't think so because now technology is more developed, so a lot of people in my country prefer to use motorcycles or cars because travel distances may be too far

Tense and form: 'more development' should be 'more developed' (adjective form). Subject-verb agreement: 'a lot of people ... is preferred' should be 'people prefer' (plural subject + base verb). Count/number: 'motorcycle or, or a car' should be plural 'motorcycles or cars' for general statement. Word choice: 'the mobilities is too far' is incorrect; 'travel distances may be too far' conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: use adjective forms, correct subject-verb agreement, and use plural nouns for generalizations.