Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Chú ý ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì quá khứ, động từ và đại từ sở hữu), cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết liên kết bằng từ nối. Ví dụ cụ thể (tuổi, dịp, cảm xúc, tần suất sử dụng) sẽ giúp câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes. I had a pink bicycle that my father bought me for my birthday when I was eight. I loved it because it had a small bell and a basket, so I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school.

제안: Tránh tiếng ừm/ừ và lặp từ; trình bày ý chính rõ ràng rồi nêu lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng từ nối (for example, because, however) để tạo liên kết logic. Thêm so sánh hoặc ví dụ cụ thể (thói quen giao thông, lý do tiện lợi) để làm rõ quan điểm.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes or cars for convenience. For example, commuters often choose motorbikes to travel faster, while cars are used for longer trips, so bicycles are mainly used by older people or for leisure.

× When I was a child I love a pink bicycle which my my father buy to me when my birthday a big and I really like it.

✓ When I was a child I loved a pink bicycle which my father bought for me for my birthday and I really liked it.

Errors: tense inconsistency and wrong verb forms, incorrect word order and extra word. Explanation: 'When I was a child' sets past time so verbs should be past: 'love' -> 'loved'; 'buy' -> past 'bought'; 'to me' -> use 'for me' or 'to me' but natural is 'bought for me'; 'when my birthday a big' is ungrammatical, should be 'for my birthday'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for actions in the past, use correct past form 'bought', use preposition 'for' with 'bought', and place phrases in natural order: 'bought for me for my birthday'.

× I usually use it right.

✓ I usually used it correctly.

Errors: tense and adverb form. Explanation: The context is past (childhood), so 'use' should be past 'used'. 'Right' as an adverb is informal and awkward here; 'correctly' is the proper adverb. Suggestion: Match tense to context and use the correct adverb form 'correctly'.

× I think not because in my country people always uh, ride a motorbike or drive car uh, sometimes, uh, old people use a motorbike to to the way to exercise, yes.

✓ I don't think so because in my country people usually ride motorbikes or drive cars; sometimes older people use bicycles to exercise.

Errors: incorrect negation and tense, article and plural issues, repetition, and wrong word choice. Explanation: 'I think not' is unnatural in present: use 'I don't think so'. 'People always uh, ride a motorbike or drive car' needs plural nouns and articles: 'ride motorbikes' or 'drive cars'. 'Old people' is better as 'older people'. 'Use a motorbike to to the way to exercise' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'use bicycles to exercise' or 'use motorbikes to get exercise'—but most natural: 'use bicycles to exercise'. Suggestion: Use natural negation, pluralize countable nouns, remove filler words, fix article use, and choose correct collocations like 'use bicycles to exercise' or 'go out to exercise'.