Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past tense and a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Keep answer under five sentences. For example, say you had a bike, when you got it, and one memory or how often you used it. Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday, and I rode it almost every day after school. It helped me feel independent and explore the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Make the answer more coherent and specific: start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid vague phrases and keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, city streets are full of commuters on simple city bikes, while some people buy lightweight racing bikes for weekend rides.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use the simple past 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had', 'I lived', 'I played').

× Yes, there are more bikes in my country and which are popular summer racer bikes and different types.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country; there are many types, including popular summer racing bikes.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect relative clause use ('and which are'). Also 'more bikes' is vague without comparison. The correction rearranges the sentence into two clear clauses: a general statement about popularity and a follow-up about varieties. 'Summer racer bikes' is adjusted to 'summer racing bikes' for natural adjective use. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise, avoid unnecessary relative clauses, and use clear quantifiers like 'many' rather than 'more' unless comparing.