Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two specific details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it to the park almost every day during the summer.

제안: Give a clear, grammatically correct opinion and support it with specific reasons or an example. Use linking words (however, because, for example) and correct subject-verb agreement. Keep responses natural and avoid redundancy. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people prefer motorbikes for convenience and speed. For example, in my city most commuters use scooters or cars, so cycling is mainly seen as a leisure activity rather than a daily transport option.

× Yes, I have one.

✓ Yes, I had one.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had' to match the past-time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for completed states in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').

× No, in my country it not too much popular because people refer to ride a bike like a motorbike then a bike.

✓ No, in my country bikes are not very popular because people tend to compare riding a bike to riding a motorbike.

Multiple issues fall under present-tense and sentence structure: the sentence refers to a general present fact, so present simple is required ('bikes are not very popular'). 'It not too much popular' is ungrammatical: use 'are not very popular' for plural 'bikes.' 'Refer to ride a bike like a motorbike then a bike' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'tend to compare riding a bike to riding a motorbike' to express habitual action. Suggestion: use present simple for general facts, match subject and verb number, and use 'tend to compare' plus gerunds ('riding') for actions.