Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use past tense for childhood, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, tense, articles), and keep it concise (max 3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents preferred I use public transport because they thought cycling was unsafe for me. As a result, I rarely learned to ride.

제안: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific details and correct grammar. Avoid repetition and irrelevant words. Use linking words (for example, especially, such as) and be precise about what you mean (bikes in general or motorcycle brands).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use motorcycles for daily travel, and international brands such as KTM and Ducati are well-known among riders. For example, KTM is popular for off-road enthusiasts, while Ducati attracts sport-bike fans.

× No, I don't have a bike since sold these years I usually go by public transport and my father don't doesn't allow me to go in a bike.

✓ No, I haven't had a bike for several years. I usually use public transport, and my father doesn't allow me to ride a bike.

Errors: incorrect present simple 'don't have' used with 'since sold these years' (intended duration) should be present perfect to express an action continuing to the present. 'since sold these years' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'for several years' or a specific period. 'go by public transport' is acceptable but 'use public transport' is more natural. 'don't doesn't allow' is a duplication and subject-verb agreement error: 'father' is singular, so use 'doesn't'. Also use 'ride a bike' rather than 'go in a bike'. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing states (have/has + past participle), ensure correct auxiliary and single negation, and use natural collocations like 'ride a bike' and 'use public transport'.

× He was always afraid to buy me a bike.

✓ He was always afraid to buy me a bike.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the past tense context. 'Was always afraid' appropriately describes a past habitual feeling. No change needed.

× Yes, I do. There are many.

✓ Yes, I do. Bikes are very common.

'There are many' is vague and incomplete; it requires a noun (many what?). In this context, specify 'bikes' or use 'Bikes are very common.' Keep present simple tense for general truths. Suggestion: include the noun after 'many' or rephrase to a clearer statement about popularity.

× There are numerous number of brands of bike are popular in my company, especially the KTM and Ducati which is both companies are overseas companies and maintain a balance.

✓ There are numerous brands of bikes that are popular in my country, especially KTM and Ducati, which are both foreign companies.

Multiple issues: 'There are numerous number of' is ungrammatical; use 'numerous' or 'a large number of' followed by a plural noun. 'brands of bike' should be 'brands of bikes' or 'brands of bikes that are popular'. 'in my company' is incorrect contextually; likely 'in my country'. 'which is both companies are overseas companies and maintain a balance' has subject-verb agreement and redundancy errors. Use 'which are both foreign companies.' Remove 'maintain a balance' unless clarified. Suggestions: use correct quantifier+noun structure ('numerous brands of bikes'), correct noun for location ('country'), ensure relative clause agrees in number ('which are'), and avoid redundant words like 'overseas companies' and 'companies' together.