Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve accuracy, grammar, and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and pronouns (use 'had', 'rode', 'helps', 'they'). Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'finish this problem.'

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day because it helped me build leg strength and balance. For example, I used to cycle to school which improved my fitness and confidence.

제안: Give a direct, coherent opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (however, because, although) and correct subject-verb agreement ("bikes are"). Avoid repetition and unclear references. Limit to 3–4 sentences and be specific about how technology or cars affect bike popularity.

예시: I think bikes are less popular now than in the past because more people own motorbikes and cars. However, cycling is becoming more popular again in cities because of bike-sharing schemes and better bike lanes, which make it a convenient and eco-friendly option for short trips.

× Yeah, I have a bike and I like to drive a bike because the bike is like a practice for my leg.

✓ Yes, I had a bike and I liked to ride it because riding the bike was good exercise for my legs.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so present tense verbs (have, like, drive) are incorrect. Use past tense (had, liked) and correct verb choice: 'ride' is the usual verb for bicycles. Also use plural 'legs' or 'leg' consistently and natural phrasing 'good exercise'. Suggestion: match verb tenses to the time frame and use natural collocations like 'ride a bike' and 'exercise for my legs'.

× Maybe if somebody facing problems in his leg at the bike will help him to finish this problem.

✓ Maybe if somebody had problems with their leg, the bike would help them to overcome the problem.

Pronoun and clause structure are incorrect. 'Somebody facing' needs an auxiliary and past tense to match context: 'somebody had problems'. Use 'with their leg' instead of 'in his leg' for natural preposition and gender-neutral pronoun. The conditional needs would/ could: 'would help them to overcome the problem'. Suggestion: form conditional clauses properly and use 'with' for body problems and 'overcome' or 'recover from' for clarity.

× Uh, I think it's a little bit because now when the world is improving the technical it's improving.

✓ Uh, I think bicycles are a little less common now because technology is improving.

The original repeats 'it's improving' and uses awkward noun phrase 'the technical'. The sentence should match present general observation: 'technology is improving'. Also need to refer to bicycles rather than vague 'it'. Suggestion: use 'technology' and concise phrasing 'are a little less common' or 'are a bit less popular'.

× So the bike it's worked by technical.

✓ So the bike is powered by technology.

'It's worked by technical' is ungrammatical. Use 'is powered by technology' or 'works with modern technology'. 'Technical' is an adjective that needs a noun (technical what?). Suggestion: use noun 'technology' and passive or active collocation 'powered by' or 'driven by'.

× So it's not like before before, not not like before before that they don't have a cars and they don't have any any way to go.

✓ So it's not like before, when they didn't have cars and didn't have many ways to get around.

Tense and article errors: referring to past time requires past tense 'didn't have'. 'a cars' is wrong: use plural 'cars' without 'a'. Remove repeated words. Also 'any way to go' is awkward; use 'ways to get around'. Suggestion: use past tense for past situations and correct article use with countable nouns.

× So the bike is a good.

✓ So the bike is good.

'A good' is incomplete: 'good' is an adjective and does not take the indefinite article alone. Either say 'a good option' or simply 'is good'. Suggestion: complete the noun phrase if using an article ('a good option/choice') or drop the article for predicate adjective ('is good').