Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using appropriate tenses and linking words. Avoid repetition and fix common errors: use past tense for childhood (I had), use 'ride' not 'drive' for bikes, and simplify phrases (e.g. 'go to the supermarket' and 'buy groceries'). Aim for 2–4 sentences, with linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was one of my favourite hobbies, and I often rode it to the supermarket to buy groceries. Also, I used to take short trips around my neighborhood with my friends on weekends.

제안: Give a direct answer, then support it with clear, specific reasons and linking words. Correct grammar: use full sentences (Bikes are popular…), match verbs and subjects (we depend), and explain 'scorching' clearly (hot climate). Avoid vague phrases like 'every country' unless you qualify them. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities and small towns. However, cars are more widely used because many people prefer air-conditioned travel in our hot climate, so they rely on cars for longer journeys.

× Of course I have, of course I have.

✓ Of course I did.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'did' is the correct past auxiliary for 'have/do' in short answers about past possession or experience. Suggestion: use past simple for events or states in the past (e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.').

× Back when I was child because one of my favorite hobby, I used to drive.

✓ Back when I was a child, one of my favorite hobbies was riding a bike.

Several issues: missing article before 'child' ('a child'), incorrect clause ordering and redundancy ('because' unnecessary), singular/plural mismatch ('hobby' should be plural 'hobbies'), and awkward verb 'used to drive' for bikes. Use past simple/past habitual: 'one of my favorite hobbies was riding a bike.' Suggestion: place the time phrase at start, include articles, match singular/plural, and use appropriate verb phrase for riding a bike.

× I used to ride the bike to go to went to supermarket and bring the my needs and also it was like to take to take a trip or tour with my.

✓ I used to ride the bike to go to the supermarket to buy what I needed, and I also liked taking trips or tours with my family.

Multiple errors: unnecessary mix of 'go to went to' (past tense repeated), missing article 'the supermarket', incorrect phrase 'bring the my needs' should be 'buy what I needed', awkward repetition 'it was like to take to take', and incomplete phrase 'with my' (missing noun such as 'family' or 'friends'). Use past habitual 'used to' plus base verbs, keep consistent past tense, include articles, and complete noun phrases. Suggestion: simplify into two clear clauses and specify the companion (e.g., 'family').

× Of course bike popular in every country, but I don't think it's as important as cars because we depends on car as as the main transportation method because it's scorching.

✓ Of course bikes are popular in many countries, but I don't think they're as important as cars because we depend on cars as the main form of transportation, especially in scorching weather.

Errors include missing verb 'are' after subject 'bike' and singular/plural mismatch ('bike' vs 'bikes'), subject-verb agreement ('we depends' should be 'we depend'), repeated words ('as as the'), article and noun form issues ('car' vs 'cars', 'transportation method' better as 'form of transportation'), and awkward final clause 'because it's scorching' which needs 'in scorching weather' or 'because of the heat'. Use plural nouns to generalize, correct subject-verb agreement, remove duplication, and choose natural collocations. Suggestion: use 'bikes are popular', 'depend on cars', and 'in scorching weather' for clarity.