Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and articles (e.g., “when I was a child”), and avoid unnecessary repetition like “used to” twice. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my sister. Because I learned to ride early, I still feel confident cycling now.

제안: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct statement, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, “because” and “so”). Use correct noun forms and articles (e.g., “a mode of transportation,” “the country has dedicated bike lanes”). Keep sentences concise and logically connected.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular now. During the pandemic many people used them for short trips, and more recently rising petrol prices have encouraged cycling, so the government has even created dedicated bike lanes.

× Yes, I used to play with my bike when I was child and I used to play it with my sister and I really love the fact that growing up I had try it before, that's why I can use it until now.

✓ Yes, I used to play with my bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it with my sister. I really love that I tried it when I was growing up; that's why I can still use it now.

Multiple present tense and related form errors: 'when I was child' is missing the article a (Grammar problem type 22 Article errors). 'play it' is incorrect collocation for riding a bike; use 'ride it' which is verb choice but treated under present tense/form (6). 'I really love the fact that growing up I had try it before' mixes tenses and uses incorrect past participle form 'try' instead of 'tried' (Grammar problem type 9), and 'had tried' is unnecessary; simple past 'tried' fits context. 'that's why I can use it until now' uses present modal phrasing awkwardly; 'can still use it now' is correct present ability. Suggestion: add the article 'a child', change 'play it' to 'ride it', change 'had try' to 'tried' or 'I tried it when I was growing up', and use 'can still use it now' for present ability. Remember to keep consistent past reference for childhood activities and present for current ability.

× Yes, this during pandemic it has been one of the mode of transportation of people going through places and work.

✓ Yes, during the pandemic it was one of the modes of transportation for people traveling to places and work.

Preposition and article errors: 'this during pandemic' has an extra 'this' and lacks the definite article 'the' before 'pandemic' (Grammar problem type 22). 'one of the mode' should be 'one of the modes' (singular/plural issue, type 1). 'transportation of people' is better expressed as 'transportation for people' (incorrect preposition, type 11). 'going through places and work' is awkward; use 'traveling to places and work' to convey movement to destinations. Suggestion: remove 'this', add 'the', pluralize 'mode' to 'modes', use 'for' and 'traveling to' for clearer meaning.

× And until now, since the gasoline is increasingly the bike has been widely used and their country dedicate a line on road for bikes.

✓ And even now, as gasoline prices have been increasing, bikes are widely used, and the country has dedicated bike lanes on the road.

Tense and agreement errors: 'since the gasoline is increasingly' is ungrammatical; use 'as gasoline prices have been increasing' to show ongoing change (present perfect progressive idea, type 6). 'the bike has been widely used' is awkward passive; better to say 'bikes are widely used' for general present situation (subject-verb agreement, type 27). 'their country dedicate a line on road for bikes' has pronoun and verb form problems: 'their country' should be 'the country' or 'my country' (incorrect use of pronouns, type 12) and 'dedicate' should be past or present perfect 'has dedicated' to match timeframe, plus 'a line on road' should be 'bike lanes on the road' (article and plural issues, types 22 and 1). Suggestion: use 'as gasoline prices have been increasing', 'bikes are widely used', and 'the country has dedicated bike lanes on the road' for grammatical and natural phrasing.