Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve accuracy, fluency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (articles, tense and pronouns), avoid repetition and filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep to no more than 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small green bicycle with a little basket on the front where I could carry my toys. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, which helped me learn balance and confidence.

제안: Make the answer more natural and add a specific example or reason. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use a linking word to add details (e.g., "because" or "for example") and include one concrete example or statistic if possible. Avoid redundant phrasing like "just normal."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for daily commuting because they are cheap and practical, and companies also use bicycles for fast local deliveries in crowded city centers.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'child'. Use 'a child' because the noun is singular and unspecified. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a' in similar contexts (e.g., 'when I was a student').

× It was pretty much small green green bike with a small like basket in front where I can put myself.

✓ It was a pretty small green bike with a small basket in front where I could put my things.

Multiple issues: 'pretty much' is incorrect here; use 'pretty' as an adverb before an adjective. Repeated 'green' is redundant. Missing article before 'small green bike' (use 'a'). 'Like' used as filler should be removed. 'Where I can put myself' is incorrect — you cannot 'put yourself' in a basket; use 'could put my things' and match past tense 'could' with the past narrative. Suggestions: use one adjective order and include appropriate articles; replace fillers and correct the object phrase and tense.

× Yes, I absolutely think that bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I absolutely think that bikes are popular in my country.

Sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple appropriately to express a general opinion, so no change is needed.

× They are used as just normal transportation and they are also used for deliveries.

✓ They are used as normal transportation and for deliveries.

Redundant structure 'are used' repeated and unnecessary 'just'. Simplify by removing 'just' and combining parallel elements: 'used as normal transportation and for deliveries.' This improves conciseness and clarity.