Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ содержит множество ошибок в грамматике, лексике и временах. Нужно: 1) использовать прошедшее время (I didn't have / I didn't own). 2) исправить орфографию и выбор глаголов (child → childhood, write → ride). 3) дать более развернутый, но короткий ответ: тема → причина → короткое пояснение. 4) избегать разговорных сокращений (wanna) в экзамене. Пример структуры: 1 предложение — прямой ответ; 1–2 предложения — причина или краткое пояснение с логической связкой.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking and playing indoors, so my parents never bought one for me. As a result, I usually joined my friends on foot rather than riding with them.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит повторы и незавершённую мысль. Нужно: 1) убрать повторы («in in»). 2) завершать предложение и давать конкретные детали (где и почему они популярны). 3) использовать связки (for example, because, especially) и привести пример или причину. 4) по длине — 2–3 предложения максимум, чёткое мнение + причина/пример.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go to the market, especially in smaller towns.

× No, I don't. I don't have a bike in my child because I don't wanna write with my friends.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't want to ride with my friends.

The original sentence mixes present tense with a past context. Use past simple for past habits or situations: 'didn't have' and 'didn't want'. 'in my child' is incorrect; use 'when I was a child'. 'wanna' is informal spoken contraction; use 'want to' or 'wanted to' in corrected form. Also 'write with my friends' is likely a mistaken word; 'ride with my friends' is appropriate for bikes. Suggestion: use past simple consistently for past events and choose correct verbs and time expressions.

× Yes, I think in in our country the bikes are very popular. So it's.

✓ Yes, I think in our country bikes are very popular.

There is a repeated word 'in in' which is an error; remove duplication. 'the bikes' is unnecessary general article here; use 'bikes' to speak in general. The fragment 'So it's.' is incomplete and should be removed. Suggestion: avoid redundant words, use articles correctly for general statements, and ensure sentences are complete.