Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, avoid repeating the examiner's question, and give a clear statement about whether you had a bike plus a brief supporting detail. Keep it natural, limit to about 2–4 sentences, and use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') to connect ideas. Use specific details (age, type of bike, how often you rode) and correct grammar (e.g., 'I had' not repeating the question).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I got it when I was eight, and it was a small red bike with training wheels. Because my house was near a park, I used to ride it almost every day with my friends.

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatical: begin with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because', 'so' or 'therefore' to connect reasons and results, and avoid redundancy ('during this time', 'most of the people'). Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'gasoline prices have increased', 'in my country').

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming increasingly popular in my country. Because gasoline prices have risen and people want to save money and reduce pollution, many commuters now cycle to work. For example, my cousin switched to biking last year and says it saves him both time and expense.

× 'Yes, during this time most of the people are tend to have bikes since the gasoline prices increases so they want to be more efficient and be eco friendly.'

✓ 'Yes, nowadays most people tend to have bikes because gasoline prices have increased, so they want to be more efficient and eco-friendly.'

'Problems: incorrect tense and auxiliary with 'tend' (should not use "are tend"), incorrect plural agreement with "prices increases" (should be "prices have increased"), awkward phrase "during this time" (use "nowadays"), and style: "be eco friendly" should be "eco-friendly". Suggestions: remove "are" before "tend", use present perfect "have increased" to link past price rises to present situation, use "nowadays" for current trends, omit "the" before "people" when speaking generally, and hyphenate "eco-friendly".'

× 'So bikes are becoming more popular in our my country.'

✓ 'So bikes are becoming more popular in my country.'

'Problems: redundant possessive words "our my". Only one possessive is needed. Suggestions: choose the appropriate possessive for the speaker ("my country"), and remove the extra word to correct subject-verb clarity.'