Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: open with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, um), correct tense and verb forms, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking phrase when giving the follow-up plan.

예시: Yes. I had a bike as a child and I took cycling classes, so riding became one of my favorite hobbies. However, I haven’t ridden for years and I’ve forgotten how. If I have time this summer, I plan to relearn by practicing in a nearby park twice a week.

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and specificity: start with a direct opinion sentence, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary (faster, drive, buy) and avoid repetition.

예시: Not really. Most people prefer cars because they are faster and more convenient for long journeys. For example, families often drive to work or weekend destinations since cars carry more luggage and are perceived as safer.

× 'Well, when I was a child I remember uh, I used to participate in some uh, cycling classes and riding bicycles that day was one of my favorite hobbies.'

✓ 'When I was a child, I remember I used to take cycling classes, and riding a bicycle was one of my favorite hobbies.'

'Present tense issue (ID 6): The original sentence mixes present and past awkwardly and uses plural where singular is better. Use 'I remember I used to take' to keep recollection in present of past habit, and 'riding a bicycle' (singular) sounds natural when referring to the activity as a hobby. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use articles appropriately.'

× 'Unfortunately these days I uh, forgot how to ride a bike and I, if I uh, have enough time I would re learn it again.'

✓ 'Unfortunately these days I have forgotten how to ride a bike, and if I have enough time, I will relearn it.'

'Past tense issue (ID 5) and Future tense issue (ID 7): 'forgot' is simple past but refers to a present state, so use present perfect 'have forgotten'. For the conditional, use first conditional for a real future possibility: 'if I have enough time, I will relearn it.' Also use 'relearn' as one word and remove redundant 'again.' Suggestion: match tense to meaning and use standard conditional structure.'

× 'Unfortunately not, because most of the people these days would rather to use car instead of buy, because it's not only very faster, but also easier to write and you can, uh, travel long distance, long distance for, uh, faster.'

✓ 'Unfortunately not, because most people these days would rather use a car instead of buying one, because it is not only faster but also easier to drive, and you can travel long distances more quickly.'

'Singular and plural issue (ID 1), Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13): 'most of the people' is better as 'most people'; 'rather to use car' should be 'rather use a car'; 'instead of buy' should be 'instead of buying one' (gerund after instead of); 'very faster' is incorrect — use 'faster' without 'very'; 'easier to write' is incorrect word choice for driving; 'long distance' should be plural 'long distances' and phrase ordering improved. Suggestion: use correct noun forms, gerunds after 'instead of', correct comparatives and appropriate verbs like 'drive'.'