Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and grammatical errors (use past tense). For example, say when you got the bike, who gave it to you, or a short memory related to it to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes—I did. I got my first bicycle when I was in primary school; my parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I remember practicing every afternoon until I could ride without training wheels.

제안: Give a clear opinion then support it with specific reasons or examples, and correct small repetition and grammar issues. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, also) to make your answer coherent. Mention facts or personal observations (e.g., cycling lanes, city culture) to strengthen your response.

예시: Definitely. Many people in my country cycle to work or school because it is cheap and convenient; for example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and I often see commuters using e-bikes. Additionally, cycling helps reduce air pollution and traffic congestion, so it is both practical and environmentally friendly.

× Uh, yes, I have.

✓ Uh, yes, I did.

The question was about the past (Did you have a bike when you were a child?), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'did' is the correct past-tense short answer form for 'have' in this context. Suggestion: use past-tense responses to past-tense questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had').

× When I, uh, when I in my primary school, I get my first bicycle.

✓ When I was in primary school, I got my first bicycle.

Multiple errors: missing verb 'was' after 'when I', wrong tense 'get' (present) instead of past 'got', and redundant phrasing 'When I, uh, when I'. According to the rules, this is a sentence structure issue and past tense issue; correction uses proper past continuous/state 'was in' and simple past 'got'. Suggestion: simplify filler words and match past-time clauses with past-tense verbs (e.g., 'When I was in primary school, I got my first bicycle').

× Definitely. People ride bikes, go to work or go to school, and I think ride ride bikes may be a great way to protect our environment.

✓ Definitely. People ride bikes to go to work or to go to school, and I think riding bikes may be a great way to protect our environment.

Errors include repetition 'ride ride', incorrect verb form after 'think' (should use gerund 'riding'), and awkward parallel structure. This is primarily a present tense/form issue and verb + -ing form problem. Use infinitive 'to go' for purpose and gerund 'riding' after 'think' when expressing a general activity. Suggestion: avoid duplicate words and use consistent structures: 'People ride bikes to go to work or to school, and I think riding bikes...'.'