Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good. To improve, make it slightly more informative by adding one or two supporting details (e.g., how you felt about it, who gave it to you, or how often you used it). Use a linking phrase if you add more information to keep it coherent. Keep the total length under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood every weekend, and my parents bought it for my seventh birthday.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains hesitations, grammatical errors, and vague phrasing. Improve by removing filler words, correcting grammar, and providing a specific reason and an example or comparison. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so" correctly, and avoid repeating words. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars, so they rely on bicycles for short trips. For example, students and market vendors often use bikes to commute and carry goods.

× Yes, because my country is uh, developing country.

✓ Yes, because my country is a developing country.

The noun 'developing country' requires an indefinite article 'a' before it when referring to one country in general. Without the article the phrase is ungrammatical. Suggestion: include 'a' before singular, countable nouns ('a developing country').

× I think most of the people will use by to go around the places they want.

✓ I think most people will use bikes to get around to the places they want.

Multiple errors: 'most of the people' is grammatical but 'most people' is more natural here; 'will use by' is incorrect because 'by' is a preposition, not a verb, and probably a typo for 'bike' or 'bikes'; plural noun 'bikes' matches 'most people' and present simple ('use') is preferred for general truths instead of 'will use'. Also 'go around the places they want' is awkward; 'get around to the places they want' is natural. Suggestion: use 'most people', use correct noun 'bikes', and use present simple for habitual/general statements.