Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'four-wheel' or 'with training wheels', 'excited' instead of 'beat'). Keep to a maximum of five sentences and avoid filler like 'But yeah, that's all.'

예시: Yes — I did. When I was about six my parents gave me a small four-wheel bike with training wheels, and I was very excited. I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me gain confidence before learning to ride a two-wheeler.

제안: Improve pronunciation and grammar, and organize the answer with a topic sentence followed by specific reasons and examples using linking words. Use correct nouns and plural forms ('bikes'), smoother linking ('especially in rural areas because...'), and avoid fragments. Provide at least one concrete example or comparison.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas. This is because they are inexpensive and practical for short journeys, so farmers and older adults often use them to get to the market or visit neighbors.

× I was given a bike with four wheel.

✓ I was given a bike with four wheels.

The noun 'wheel' must agree in number with the quantity 'four'. Use the plural form 'wheels' after a numeral. Suggestion: make nouns plural after numbers greater than one (e.g., 'three apples', 'four wheels').

× At that time I really had beat and I really want to cycle every day around my house.

✓ At that time I was really excited and I really wanted to cycle every day around my house.

The sentence mixes incorrect word choice and tenses. 'Had beat' is incorrect; likely meant 'was excited' or 'felt happy'. Also the context is past, so 'want' should be past 'wanted'. Suggestion: keep verbs in the past when describing past situations and choose appropriate verbs (e.g., 'I was excited', 'I wanted').

× But yeah, that's all.

✓ But yeah, that's all I can remember.

The original is short but acceptable in speech; however as an answer it is abrupt. Expanding to 'that's all I can remember' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: add a complement to complete the thought when concluding an answer.

× Bites are really popular in my country, especially in the rural area.

✓ Bikes are really popular in my country, especially in rural areas.

'Bites' is a spelling error for 'bikes'. Also 'the rural area' should be plural or uncountable: use 'rural areas' or 'rural areas of the country'. Suggestion: check spelling for key vocabulary and use plural when speaking generally about multiple regions ('rural areas').

× People usually use bike to commute especially. Farmers and. Or elderly you know.

✓ People usually use bikes to commute, especially farmers and the elderly.

Several issues: 'use bike' needs plural 'bikes' and the infinitive should be 'use bikes to commute'. The fragments 'Farmers and. Or elderly you know.' must be combined into one clause and 'the elderly' requires the definite article. Suggestion: combine fragments into a complete sentence and ensure noun phrases are correct ('farmers and the elderly').