Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và một số câu thiếu tính mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Cần sửa động từ và danh từ (ví dụ "I have a bag" sai ngữ cảnh; nên là "I had a bike"). (2) Cần dùng thì quá khứ thống nhất ("was" → "were" cho chủ từ số nhiều/đúng ngữ cảnh). (3) Câu "to steal independence on me" sai cấu trúc và từ; nên nói "to give me independence" hoặc "to help me be more independent". (4) Hạn chế dài dòng không cần thiết và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu tự nhiên. (5) Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g. "so", "and").

예시: Yes, I did. When I was eight my parents bought me a bike to help me become more independent. I often rode it to school and around the neighborhood when my parents were busy. I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

제안: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và trực tiếp, nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp (thống nhất số, thì), lựa chọn từ và hơi lặp ý. Cần: (1) sửa lỗi động từ/đại từ ("those vehicles is" → "those vehicles are"). (2) Dùng từ chính xác hơn ("use your strength" → "exert physical effort" hoặc "pedal"). (3) Kết hợp câu với liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g. "because", "so"). (4) Thêm một ví dụ hoặc số liệu ngắn để cụ thể hơn nếu cần. Giữ 3-4 câu tối đa.

예시: Not really. Most people in my country prefer motorbikes or cars because they are more convenient and faster than bicycles. Bicycles require physical effort to pedal and take longer for daily commutes, so I usually ride a motorbike instead.

× Yes, definitely I have a bag.

✓ Yes, definitely I had a bike.

The student used the wrong noun ('bag' instead of 'bike'), which is a lexical error rather than grammar; however the sentence also mismatches tense with the question asked about childhood. The correct response should use past tense 'had' to match 'Did you have...'. Suggestion: use the past simple 'had' for possessions in the past and ensure the noun matches the object asked about.

× When I was 8 years old my parents bought me a bike to steal independence on me.

✓ When I was 8 years old my parents bought me a bike to give me independence.

The phrase 'to steal independence on me' is incorrect. English uses 'give someone independence' or 'grant someone independence'. Also preposition 'on' is incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'give me independence' to express enabling autonomy.

× I used to roam my bike to school or to somewhere near my house when my parents was busy.

✓ I used to ride my bike to school or to places near my house when my parents were busy.

Several issues: verb choice 'roam my bike' is incorrect; native speakers say 'ride a bike'. 'To somewhere' is wrong—use 'to places' or 'somewhere near my house'. Subject-verb agreement error 'my parents was' should be 'my parents were' because 'parents' is plural. Suggestion: use 'ride my bike', 'places near my house', and plural verb 'were'.

× Not really, in my country people tend to use motorbikes or cars.

✓ Not really; in my country people tend to use motorbikes or cars.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs a clearer connector or punctuation; tense 'tend to use' is present simple and appropriate. Suggestion: add a semicolon or conjunction for clarity.

× A big part of the reason goes to the fact that those vehicles is more convenient than bikes.

✓ A big part of the reason is the fact that those vehicles are more convenient than bikes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'vehicles' is plural so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also 'goes to the fact that' is unnatural; better: 'A big part of the reason is the fact that...'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and use natural phrasing.

× When you use them, you don't need to use your strength and you can save your time.

✓ When you use them, you don't need to use physical strength and you can save time.

'Use your strength' is understandable but unnatural; 'physical strength' is clearer. 'Save your time' is unidiomatic—say 'save time' without possessive. Suggestion: drop possessive and prefer natural collocations.

× As for me, I usually use motorbike instead.

✓ As for me, I usually use a motorbike instead.

Missing article before 'motorbike': 'a motorbike' required for singular countable noun. Suggestion: add the indefinite article 'a' to make 'a motorbike'.