Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 시제 사용을 고쳐야 합니다. 과거 사실을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 사용해야 하고, 문장은 자연스럽게 구성되어야 합니다. 또한 한 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤 필요하면 짧은 추가 정보를 덧붙이세요. 예: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' 그런 다음 언제나 어디서 탔는지 또는 누가 사줬는지 같은 구체적 세부사항을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around the neighborhood every weekend with my friends, and my parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday.

제안: 문장의 흐름과 어휘 선택을 개선하세요. 'depends on the people's preference'는 어색하므로 'depends on people's preferences'처럼 자연스럽게 표현하고, 불필요한 마침표를 제거하세요. 또한 이유와 예시를 한두 문장으로 연결해 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다.

예시: I think it depends on people's preferences. For example, some people prefer cycling because it's cheap and healthy, while others choose public transport or cars for convenience, especially in big cities.

× Yes, I have when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child.' This is a tense mismatch. Use the past simple 'had' to match the past time. Also include the object 'one' (a bike) to make the sentence complete. Suggestion: Use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past, e.g., 'I had a bike.'

× Well, I think it depends on the people's preference.

✓ Well, I think it depends on people's preferences.

Using 'the people's' is awkward and unnecessary. When speaking generally about people, omit 'the.' Also 'preference' should be plural 'preferences' because different people have different choices. Suggestion: Use 'people's preferences' for general statements about many individuals' tastes.

× Some people. Prefer riding a bicycle, but others prepare taking transportation.

✓ Some people prefer riding a bicycle, but others prefer to take public transportation.

The original has a sentence break error ('Some people.'), incorrect verb choice 'prepare taking,' and unclear noun 'transportation.' Combine into one sentence, use the base verb 'prefer' consistently, and use the correct verb structure: 'prefer to take.' Also specify 'public transportation' which is the common collocation. Suggestion: Keep verbs parallel and use correct verb patterns: 'prefer riding' or 'prefer to ride,' and use correct collocations like 'public transportation.'