Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct but fuller answer: start with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Mention when you had it, who gave it or how you used it, and a brief feeling or result. Keep to fewer than five sentences and avoid one-word replies.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because it was my main way to travel short distances, I learned to be confident on the road early.

제안: Do not refuse to answer. Provide a short direct opinion and support it with a reason or example using linking words. Use 2–4 sentences: a topic sentence stating your view, then one specific reason or example introduced with a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example", "however").

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting in busy cities. For example, in my town there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle to save time and money.

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The error is using the definite article 'the' together with the indefinite article 'another'. 'Another' already includes an indefinite sense ('an other'), so 'the' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Remove 'the' to form 'another question'. Suggestion: use 'another' alone for an additional, unspecified item, or use 'the other question' if referring to a specific alternate question.