Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, correct past-tense grammar, and specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, start with a single clear sentence: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child." Then add one or two concrete details (who gave it to you, how you used it) using past tense and a linking word such as "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, my father bought it for me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to visit friends and explore my neighborhood every weekend.

제안: Answer directly, use correct sentence structure and clearer linking words (e.g., "Yes, I think so because..."). Give specific reasons and an example to support your opinion, and avoid filler words and repetition. Use present simple to describe general facts. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, many students and office workers ride bikes to school or work, and I also use mine to commute to the market twice a week.

× Something yes, I have a bike when I was young, for example, when I was young, my dad brought my brought me back for a my house. So that's all.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was young. For example, my dad once brought one back to our house.

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect word order, redundant phrases, and repeated words ('brought my brought me back for a my house'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use simple past 'I had' to match the past time reference 'when I was young'. Remove redundancies and correct word order: 'my dad once brought one back to our house' is clear and grammatical. Suggest practicing forming one clear past-tense sentence at a time and avoiding repetition.

× Who say yes to me, the main reason is that the bias one of the most popular transportation and, uh, in my country, many people use it, uh, when people going to going to their workplace or schools. And also I use it.

✓ Yes. The main reason is that bicycles are one of the most popular forms of transportation in my country. Many people use them when they go to work or school, and I use one too.

Original contains incorrect pronoun and noun forms ('Who say yes to me'), wrong noun 'bias' for 'bicycles', singular/plural inconsistencies ('it' for 'bicycles'), and verb form errors ('going to going to'). These are primarily incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and also singular/plural and verb form issues — corrected sentence uses 'bicycles' and pronoun 'them', plural agreement, and present simple for habitual actions ('many people use', 'they go'). Suggest focusing on matching nouns and pronouns in number and using simple present for habitual facts; practice replacing 'it' with 'them' when referring to plural nouns.