Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two concise reasons or a brief example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct verb forms and possessive references (e.g., “my parents didn’t like bikes” if that is what you mean).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought bikes were unsafe, so they didn’t allow me to ride one. As a result, I learned to use buses and walking to get around.

제안: Answer clearly with a topic sentence, then provide specific details and a linking word to show contrast or change. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing (e.g., “when I was a child” and “now”). Give a brief reason and, if possible, a short example or consequence. Avoid fillers and finish your sentence fully.

예시: They were not very popular when I was a child, but bikes have become more popular in new urban areas. This is partly because people want to avoid heavy traffic and because city planners have added bike lanes, which makes cycling safer.

× No, because I don't like bike, especially my parents. Umm hating hate hating bike.

✓ No, because I didn't like bikes, especially when I was with my parents. I hated bikes.

Problems: 1) Tense inconsistency: the question asks about childhood (past), so present tense 'don't like' is incorrect; use past 'didn't like' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 2) Singular/plural: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (ID 1). 3) Article/use of phrase: 'especially my parents' is unclear and likely missing a preposition/phrase; corrected to 'especially when I was with my parents' to clarify meaning (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions / ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 4) Repetition and ungrammatical phrase 'Umm hating hate hating bike' needs rewriting as a clear past statement 'I hated bikes' (ID 6 and 5: Present/past participle misuse and past tense). Suggestion: Match tense to the time referred to, use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally, and write a single clear sentence without repetitive filler words.

× The bikes aren't popular in country when I was a child, but in new area the bike is most popular because the uh, traffic accidents still increasing and.

✓ Bikes weren't popular in my country when I was a child, but in the new areas bikes are most popular now because traffic accidents are still increasing.

Problems: 1) Tense inconsistency: 'aren't popular' (present) conflicts with 'when I was a child' (past). Use past 'weren't popular' for the first clause (ID 5: Past tense issue). 2) Article use: 'in country' needs the article and possessive 'in my country' (ID 22/17: Article errors / Incorrect use of the definite article). 3) Number agreement and article: 'in new area the bike is most popular' should be 'in the new areas bikes are most popular' to match general reference and plural (ID 1: Singular and plural issue; ID 17/22). 4) Missing auxiliary verb: 'traffic accidents still increasing' requires 'are still increasing' (ID 6: Present tense issue / ID 9: past participle not relevant). 5) Sentence ending 'and.' is incomplete; removed and clause completed. Suggestions: Keep consistent time frames within clauses, use appropriate articles ('my', 'the'), match singular/plural according to general vs. specific reference, and include necessary auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses.